Yoshiii343's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Keep Calm]

What's up. For simplicity's sake, lets just call it DnB. :P

- Okay, the strings has way too much tail on it (it feels like every note is being dragged). Get that sorted.
- The drums is really weak (volume wise and sound quality wise). Try layering several kicks/snares to make it...uh, less weak and give it some increase in volume.
- Interesting string melody. Could try having a little bit of variation.

TL;DR
The strings evoke a strange feeling (I'd describe it if I didn't have a shit vocabulary), but the sound quality of the strings wrecks that. Lower the volume of the strings, and increase the volume of the other elements (like the kick and snare, particularly).

Aphoryze responds:

I guess you have some fair points there. I do agree that the drums are quite weak, especially the kick but those should be better in my upcoming songs.

[Drum and Bass - L00p]

Yo.

- dem uplifting chords
- Lacks bass. Like, a sub bass. Or a Reese bass.
- FL STOCK HI HATS. That's a no no.
- The melody could use some variation. Same goes to the drums.

TL;DR
Nice loop, but a couple of variations here and there wouldn't hurt. Also, really sorry for the short review (I'm terrible at elaborating stuff).

De4dl0ck responds:

np, thanks for the review :D

[The Hell Monster.]

Ooookay. One hell of track, I'll say.

- Drums are drowned throughout the whole track (with the exception towards the end since there are less synth parts). It's probably because the synths are too loud.
- The quality of the synths are top notch. Well done.
- Crazy ass melody you have there.
- I don't know what the hell's going on during 1:00 till 1:23. Probably should've let the wobbles have a break.

TL;DR
If you intended to make the filthiest track possible, you've done it. During the segue (1:00 till 1:23), give the wobbles a break and let the listener pull his/her shit together. Hell, let the sub bass handle the segue or something. Also, go easy on the loudness, man.

martin-wales responds:

spot on mate, thank you. I did mention the drums in the comments. had to spit the tune in two and import a wav to continue it so when the drums get better towards the end it's because I remade them. but well noticed my friend. but yeah it is a bit load. it broke my head trying to sort the levels in this track and they are still well off.lol but anyways man check back in a weeks time im gonna do another one following the same style hopefully I'll have it mastered a bit better. :D cheers for your awesome and informative review good sir. :D

[Espiritus Malignos]

Hello!

- Freaky chewy melody, nice.
- Stock FL drums are a no-no. The drums could also use some hi-hats.
- The wobble feels too "thin". Try EQing the lower frequencies.
- I feel like the whole song lacks a bassline. Not the "WAAAHAHASDHKAHDF" kind of bass. Like a sub bass or something like the sort.
- The part from 3:27 till 3:42 is sorta messy and disorganized.

Cimba responds:

I really appreciate your review!

[Fu Sylenth]

"thank you for trying this demo"
That's probably because you haven't bought Sylenth1?

- Did you use stock FL drum samples? You shouldn't use 'em...even if you want to, process the crap out of 'em.
- That wobble could use some processing/effects as well.
- At around 1:44, the volume gets really loud for some reason.
- 2:06, the melody for the keys are somewhat dissonant.

jonswe responds:

I bought it. I would never crack any kind of music software

[Back to Life]

AMG U USED HTE AMEN BRAEK REPORT 4 KOPIRITESSSSSS

*ahem* Uh...yeah. Sorry about that.
About the track:

- the beat could use some variation every now and then
- that weird "dipping" synth is...a bit off. Try using a plucky-ier synth.
- it...doesn't loop cleanly. Yes, that is a valid criticism.
- the drums and piano sounds pretty decent (sound quality wise)
- the bass shouldn't have that much portamento (sliding from one note to another)

TBH I can't really say much about it, since there's not much going on (and that I'm a sub-par reviewer *cough cough*). The track will improve, however, if you spend more time and love (yes, that's right) on it.

AeroMusic responds:

OMG CALL THE BREAK POLICEE!!!!111

jeesus, great review for such a short song
-totally agree, though its only 1 minute and I have to say I didn't spend long on this at all
-ohh that synth, yeah no I agree with that
-Yep, maybe I'll stop it being a loop haha only realised it didn't loop rhythmically after uploading
-awesome thanks
-maybe I agree that the port. could be turned down a little but I quite like it gliding. I am thinking the Bbs maybe should be As at first though

can't believe you had so much to say for this haha. But thanks for the great review, this is why I like ng