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[Imagination (UV)]

Nice first track you've got yourself here. ^__^

The intro is very nice and calming...but that water-flow ambient sound should be a little bit quieter.
I can't help but to feel the cymbal at 1:00 hits a few milliseconds too soon.
The house break, very nicely done. Could use a variation every now and then though. Maybe a different melody every 8-16 bars, I guess?
The song ends around 4:04, but what's with the extra leftovers?

TL;DR this is a great for a first submission! You should upload more of your tracks, if you have some more.

djahmusic responds:

Thank you so much, I like this kind of ''building criticize'' you gave me... I'll try my best in the future, and yeah I have many other tracks to upload soon.. this track is my latest one btw =)

Greetings DJ A.H.

[Humanity Is Dying DEMO]

What the f.

I'll be honest, this sounds like a bunch of random sounds thrown in. I mean sure, there's that atmosphere pad thing around 0:32, but from what I'm hearing it's not really following any scale, or progression.

I don't even know what the hell is that reversed supersaw sounding this is playing.

TheAntiMatter responds:

Fair enough. Thank you.

[Volatile {Dj-Abbic}]

<insert preface here>

Nice intro you have there.
The clap/snare thing at needs to shift a few milliseconds later, since it sounds a bit off (in terms of timing).
Never thought I'd say this, but the complex bit needs more wubs. This sounds more electro without those wubs, man.

DjAbbic responds:

The clap/snare is offbeat a tiny amount to make it sound fatter, so it was done on purpose.

Also, not all complextro has wubs. My inspirations, such as Wolfgang Gartner, Porter Robinson and Overwerk do not have wubs in their tracks, yet the track sounds complex.

I know that someone like Mord Fustang uses wubs, and I love it, but when I made this, I was not thinking about wubs at all, mainly because it's was influenced by complextro which had no wubs.

I'll see what I can do to incorporate some wubs in my next track though, and see how it turns out.

Thanks a lot for your review :)

[King Kilo - Existence]

Bloody hell, this sounds menacing. But moving on...

The drums could use some beefing up. Try layering the kicks and snares with something heavier. Also, hi hats.

That vocal clip at around 1:02 is a bit too long. If it was used in the later parts (more energetic parts...if it had any more), then it would probably fit in fine,

The energetic bit could use more energy. Get a low, gritty/distorted bass in there (or if there's already one, fatten that poor skinny fella!). And sometimes the beat skip doesn't sound nice (before the 4-to-the-floor beat).

TL;DR
Hook this track up with the sloppiest couch potato you know and get this sick filth real fat.

KingKilo responds:

Now these are the reviews I like.

You're right, I didn't layer any of my instruments. Would be a smart plan for future tunes!
As for the vocal clip, it's exactly 4 bars, so I thought it would fit right in, but I'll keep that in mind, next time I'm voicing my own music.

As for beefing it up, that's always a good idea if you ask me. Hahaha. The bass'ier the better. ;)

Cheers!

[WP ~ 1.28:Dubstep]

Erm...I don't know how to start with this...

This sounds more funk than anything else.
The random beat skips and rewind effects sounds off.
What the fuck happened at 0:28? And 0:31?
The synthetic beat at 1:04 just ruins the whole song. And sounds a lot louder than the bass melody.

TL;DR
This is either funk infused with dub (albeit not so well), or a song you've decided to send to FX City (which is terrible city. Like Detroit.).

Wavepad responds:

This Review is so confusing....

[Tale of the Storyteller]

A review in hyphensssssss since I'm terrible at writing good reviews.

- The intro is pretty freaky.
- I really like the piano melody.
- dem arp plucks, i like.
- The strings are a nice touch.
- The tempo change kinda put me off the first time listening to it.

Overview:
It's a good song, it has that "distressing" mood to it. Something you'd probably hear in a sci-fi movie/game/flash thing.

GershBeats responds:

thanks for the critique and the kind words! I'll take it to heart - I haven't quite mastered tempo changes in fruity loops :P

[Lancashire Battle~ Teaser]

Wait a second...Trois? Making EDM?
You're an interesting composer, you know that?

Troisnyx responds:

Admittedly, EDM from me is VERY rare... mainly because I am still new in the area, although I know a little bit about the musicality behind it.

Heh, I'm glad you think so, though. ^_^

[Techno thing [DeshRMX]]

Had to fight my mastering? Is there anything wrong with it?
Sounds phase-y. Also, I loved that melody at 1:49.
Hmm...should probably try doing melodies like that...

DESHIEL responds:

yeah you see, I had to readjust lots of stuff to please my tastes :D

The kick for example :D I spent a great deal of finding out how to inject my style of mastaring into your own without erasing you completely from the board. (thats due to my remix phylosophy ;D)
Your mastering of the kick seemed to lock higher frequencies that I usualy do with kicks :D

But hey my own mastering still has a lot of improving to do, so I coulnd't avoid the forced sound compresion around 2:30 :(

[Dreams of Yore]

Samulis...
Your work is INCREDIBLE. Honestly.
Are you classically trained?

samulis responds:

Only two years of theory and what I have taught myself about orchestration. I'm really glad you like it. :)

[Aylius - Lucid [NEW SONG]]

Was lucky enough to catch you at Monstercat's plug.dj room. It was cool, showing off your stuff.
This song is even better.

Exotec responds:

:D thanks!