Yoshiii343's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Raisin Bread Anthem]

This song is appropriate for consuming any kind of bread tbh :P Anyway...

This is more suitable to be a loop rather than a song...unless if you're gonna extend this. Another thing is the outro. It's too short, yo.

Also, describe the "raisin bread" genre. This could be the next big thing since big room house.

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[From The Depths (Drumstep]

preface.txt

- That intro is a bit too long.
- The volume could be a bit louder. Particularly for the drums.
- I feel as if this track lacks the lower frequencies. Maybe a sub bass, or a bass would do some good.
- I love those synths. They're very well made.

yeajimmiboi responds:

Thanks mate I'll use this in the next version of the track. thanks for commenting.

[Waterfalls]

intro.txt

Man, your drums are pretty...thin. I'd suggest using different samples for it. Also, somehow I got the feeling you added too much reverb to it.

The song is pretty repetitive...and quiet. Maybe a different melody, some variations of the beat, and a little bump for the volume would do some good.

I don't know why, but I feel like the background's (I don't know a better word for it) a mess partially caused by the reverb on the drums, and something else that I can't really put my finger on.

Also, the lower frequencies is almost nonexistent in the track. Throw in a sub bass for good measure.

hoorayjay responds:

Thank you for you review! It is quiet because I didn't master it (because i don't know how lol). The background thing is a point I haven't heard before, I'll make sure to look into it.
This was just a test for mixing styles of music, so thank you!

[Hyperactive 2014 mix]

Hi!

- Okay, the volume on this is loud. Like WAY too loud. Go easy on the volume. There's too much clipping.
- That bass/every other synth is too distorted, take that easy too.
- If it's any consolation, I like the melody the super saw is playing.

accies responds:

Hi, thanks for the feedback, my intention was for this song to be loud and in-your-face and for the synths to be quite harsh and gritty although I may have overcooked it with the volume and the compressors. Have sussed that though so will upload the newer less-distorted version shortly :)

[Joshi'O - Dark in my room]

Hello.

- Try replacing that distorted synth you use as a bass (the one before the drop) with a non-distorted sub bass.
- You should lower the volume of the synths during the drop. It's very loud.
- Some white noise (or pads. Basically something that adds to the higher frequencies) could do this track some good.
- Them wobbles could use some tightening of the LFOs.

[The End?]

Hi!

- At first I thought that this was a remix of some track from Crash Bandicoot, but I guess not. It does sound inspired by it though.
- That sound at 1:55 could has it volume lowered though.
- I really love the percs in this.

Rekuiem responds:

Niiiice, means when I worked on this I was picking up on some influences I wanted to incorporate. I love Crash Bandicoot music, and when I did this one I was trying to get into a groove that was reminiscent of its style while keeping it my own. The mixing never got finalized but I am an eager sharer and the projects are always ready to fix. Thanks for that suggestion I'll remember it when I go back to it to polish. I was really starting to get more intimate with my percussion so I'm glad you dig them!!!