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[Swoon (etK Remix)]

Hey there.

- Nice intro, but those chords dropping in pitch goes to fast. Even if you want it to go that fast, don't make the build-up too long.
- What's up with that random ass vocal bit?
- The beat's messy as heckle. Like, it's glitching out terribly.
- The volume randomly ducks throughout the track.
- The break at 2:23 is really muddy.
- During those messy breaks, the vocal only bit sounds off.
- That outro is weird as hell.

etK responds:

I love weird outros :D
Thanks for the interesting review!

[Just some glitch-hop loop]

Yo.

- That buzz synth is really loud. Lower that volume.
- Try changing the rhythm pattern in the last measure.

...Yeah, I've got nothing else to nitpick. I'd tell ye more if it was longer.

Norato responds:

Yo.... just a test, not even have that project anymore :D

[I'm Centered]

Hello there!

- Woah there man, go easy on the volumes and shit. It's really loud.
- The drums (kick and snare, particularly) are panned too much to the left. Centre it a little. (a tad ironic don't you think?)
- During the drop, you'd might wanna let the wubs be more heard than the other synths.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks for the tips, I didn't really touch the panning on the drums though.

Peace and love,
Lone X

[Sky Kingdom]

I think this belongs in Techno rather than DnB. Anyway...

- I like the synths. Very nice quality.
- The super saw synth is a bit too loud.

TL;DR
I feel like this song is incomplete. The lack of drums/a beat and the short length feels like you haven't really done much with the track. You should spend more time working on this track.

[World War 3]

What's up?

- Why is the synth all quiet during the intro? You could've used filters instead.
- That hi hat's a bit too loud. Lower the volume of that.
- Change the pattern of the kick and snare every few measures to keep it not repetitive.
- That drop...is really weird. It sounds off-key to me.
- The volume randomly goes up and down in this track. What's with that?
- The outro ends a bit too abruptly.

DJRoBomb responds:

Thanks, check out my other songs! I didn't have alot of time to make this song, and the reason the volume kept going up and down was because I figured the volume was too low at the beginning and too high at the end

[The Saltwater Scourge]

Holla.

- Nice pirate-y melodies. Can't help but to feel that some of the melodies in the intro is off key.
- That transition to the drop comes a bit too soon.
- That bass and lead during is too loud.

Also, sorry in advance if this review is too short/simplified.

Isulf responds:

Daamn, I hear it Now XD
I'll try to fix that XD But the Off-Key thing is something i do on purpose :P

[Fourier's Haunted Forest]

Huh. Interesting.

- Feels more...uh, how you say...electronic and futuristic than being scary. And that's a good thing.
- Very soothing. You could probably listen to this if you're having trouble sleeping.
- The high pitched bits of the melody sorta hurts the ears (...for me, at least).
- That melody from 1:57 till 2:13 spoiled the mood, but that was remedied afterwards.

TL;DR
Really soothing track, some bits wasn't easy on the ears but that's probably because I'm a pussy hahahahahhashdakshk