Yoshiii343's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just some glitch-hop loop]

Yo.

- That buzz synth is really loud. Lower that volume.
- Try changing the rhythm pattern in the last measure.

...Yeah, I've got nothing else to nitpick. I'd tell ye more if it was longer.

Norato responds:

Yo.... just a test, not even have that project anymore :D

[Happy Times/Sad Times]

yoooooooooooooooo. Yeah, this isn't really DnB.

- dem drum samples sounds flimsy. Replace 'em with something that sounds...uh, harder. Or maybe even layer several drum samples.
- Make the hi hat play on every beat (16th notes, i believe is the proper term). The drums gotta sound energetic.
- I really love that melody.

MonkeyToast responds:

Haha, I should probably try making an actual DnB song sometime as well ^^
And thanks a lot for the critiques! I've started to put more time into drums as that's something I'm laking with at the moment.
Glad you enjoyed the melody, as that's something I often put a lot of time into :)

[The Runner-Up]

Holla

- First thing I noticed that it's a tad too quiet, and lacks the lower and mid frequencies.
- Those guitars feel really unnatural. Particularly the one playing the melody.
- It loops...but not in a good way. Might wanna remove the drums in the first few measures of the intro.

I'd give more help if my laptop didn't make the player skip every second or so.

[I'm Centered]

Hello there!

- Woah there man, go easy on the volumes and shit. It's really loud.
- The drums (kick and snare, particularly) are panned too much to the left. Centre it a little. (a tad ironic don't you think?)
- During the drop, you'd might wanna let the wubs be more heard than the other synths.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks for the tips, I didn't really touch the panning on the drums though.

Peace and love,
Lone X

[Unreleased Mix - (Aero)]

@Valkery72 dis isn't yotube fagghkaf!!!!!!!!!!!!111!!!234566!!!

Anyway (really short reviews because I'm a fagghkaf myself):

Aluminium
- That's a weird lead. Acidic shit yo.
- Those recorded bits was a nice touch.

Sunset
- I used to have a duplo song named Sunset. i should eat shit
- I love those strings.

Electric Snow
- Those synths could use a volume boost. Or some mids, idk lol

Umbrella (ella...ella...ella)
- Feels like it's the 2000s again.

Dancing in Outer Space
- dat intro
- ...actually, what the heck (i expected a 90's electro-funk track gdi)

Ramsesesese D
- no comment (because i'm an idiot)

Dancing in Outer Space gets my pick.

AeroMusic responds:

haha I thought that at first but I think he just likes the first one best :P

1. wasn't too sure about the recorded bits, wanted it to sound like a radio changing frequencies - but glad people liked it

2. they're probably symphobia ones :P we all have duplo songs named sunset haha or "insert feeling here"

3. yeah they're a bit weak aren't they - another reason why that song didn't work out :P

4. oh yeah, thats actually the 2nd drop but I just really like it (the first isn't electro funk either though so dont get you're hopes up) melodies from atomsfear dancing in outer space btw

5. ...olololol

thanks for listening man, outer space was probably the closest to being released tbh

[Sky Kingdom]

I think this belongs in Techno rather than DnB. Anyway...

- I like the synths. Very nice quality.
- The super saw synth is a bit too loud.

TL;DR
I feel like this song is incomplete. The lack of drums/a beat and the short length feels like you haven't really done much with the track. You should spend more time working on this track.

[World War 3]

What's up?

- Why is the synth all quiet during the intro? You could've used filters instead.
- That hi hat's a bit too loud. Lower the volume of that.
- Change the pattern of the kick and snare every few measures to keep it not repetitive.
- That drop...is really weird. It sounds off-key to me.
- The volume randomly goes up and down in this track. What's with that?
- The outro ends a bit too abruptly.

DJRoBomb responds:

Thanks, check out my other songs! I didn't have alot of time to make this song, and the reason the volume kept going up and down was because I figured the volume was too low at the beginning and too high at the end

[The Saltwater Scourge]

Holla.

- Nice pirate-y melodies. Can't help but to feel that some of the melodies in the intro is off key.
- That transition to the drop comes a bit too soon.
- That bass and lead during is too loud.

Also, sorry in advance if this review is too short/simplified.

Isulf responds:

Daamn, I hear it Now XD
I'll try to fix that XD But the Off-Key thing is something i do on purpose :P

[Fourier's Haunted Forest]

Huh. Interesting.

- Feels more...uh, how you say...electronic and futuristic than being scary. And that's a good thing.
- Very soothing. You could probably listen to this if you're having trouble sleeping.
- The high pitched bits of the melody sorta hurts the ears (...for me, at least).
- That melody from 1:57 till 2:13 spoiled the mood, but that was remedied afterwards.

TL;DR
Really soothing track, some bits wasn't easy on the ears but that's probably because I'm a pussy hahahahahhashdakshk

[Debut]

Haelo.

- You really need to work on your transitions. Add cymbals, white noise or something when the filter reaches the peak (idk what the term is) so that it doesn't sound weird as the song progresses.
- Throw in a sub bass (or just a bass line) in there. The track feels really desolate.
- Add in some hi hat patterns to not make the beat too boring.
- Work on the outro too. End the beat as the melody ends, play the first note as the final note then giving a few seconds of silence to let it echo.

CombustibleChimera responds:

I appreciate your tips! Then again I made this on the fly so I didn't expect it to sound the best.
Also there is a sub bass, it just isn't the most powerful one.