Yoshiii343's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dungeon 8 Bitty]

*My long overdue review of your stuff, as you've done for me for "techno thing" back in October '12
*also be warned I'm pretty bad at reviewing so yeah

Sounds really retro, I can tell you that much. Sounds NES-y. If someone made a pretty dark, 8-bit RPG game, they should use this as dungeon music or otherwise I will go to their pages and say really mean things. >:C

I can't help but to notice that some of the melodies past the first minute seem dissonant. I'm guessing that's intentional?

That's all I have to say. :/
Oh, and you should probably make it a bit loopable...?

DivoFST responds:

Thanks for the review :)
I made this just for fun, i didnt really spend much time making it good, its just a shame that it is kept in the top of my audio when it has nothing to do with my style xD

[DV - Something Heavy]

yes i liek wobs
'tis pretty minimal, and has that frightening feeling. The only thing that needs some changing is the melody. Maybe having some other synths take that melody bit?

la-yinn responds:

Minimal sauce, yum yum

I want to add some more basslines but I just know massive is gonna be a tit and destroy my current patch when I load up another instance. :c

thanks for the review mate

[LHM - Endless Handbag 98']

Catchy. Sounds like something you'd hear in The Sims or like those commercials trying to have that hip vibe.

DreamEater responds:

Thanks very much bro, that's exactly what I was going for ;D

[Insanity - SkD (WIP)]

preface.txt

First things first, that Far Cry 3's "definition of insanity" sound clip is copyrighted (even a short 5-10 second clip is a no-no), sadly; and therefore cannot be posted here on NG. You'd be better off posting the version with the voice clip on SoundCloud and posting a version without the voice clip.

Did you use FL Studio's stock kick and snare sample? It be better if you'd avoided using 'em dryly (without processing the shit out of it).

You could give the drums a bit of variation by throwing in some hi-hats, or maybe removing or adding more kicks in there.

That little break at 1:55 till 3:25 with the voice clip is...well, WAY too long. You could have made some sort of progression (adding more elements/instruments). And the cut back to the filthy wobbles, with all that tension from the previous few seconds kinda kills it. Try putting in noise sweeps, or giving that string tension some reverb.

SkullDrone responds:

Thanks for the review!

And are you sure I can't even use the the soundclip for personal non-profit reasons? Like I don't get that whole legal shit lol.

And yeah I know the break is WAY too long. But I just wanted to get the whole thing in there because it really explains the whole Insanity thing well (it makes the second drop really have a meaning, if that makes sense).

I will make changes in the percs, this is still a WIP so there is not much detail in it.

I really appreciated your review bro, thanks :)

- SkullDrone

[Imagination (UV)]

Nice first track you've got yourself here. ^__^

The intro is very nice and calming...but that water-flow ambient sound should be a little bit quieter.
I can't help but to feel the cymbal at 1:00 hits a few milliseconds too soon.
The house break, very nicely done. Could use a variation every now and then though. Maybe a different melody every 8-16 bars, I guess?
The song ends around 4:04, but what's with the extra leftovers?

TL;DR this is a great for a first submission! You should upload more of your tracks, if you have some more.

djahmusic responds:

Thank you so much, I like this kind of ''building criticize'' you gave me... I'll try my best in the future, and yeah I have many other tracks to upload soon.. this track is my latest one btw =)

Greetings DJ A.H.