Haelo.
- You really need to work on your transitions. Add cymbals, white noise or something when the filter reaches the peak (idk what the term is) so that it doesn't sound weird as the song progresses.
- Throw in a sub bass (or just a bass line) in there. The track feels really desolate.
- Add in some hi hat patterns to not make the beat too boring.
- Work on the outro too. End the beat as the melody ends, play the first note as the final note then giving a few seconds of silence to let it echo.